Hey everyone, I'm just checking in. It's been pretty quiet here for some time. I think this story has a lot of potential but it definitely needs more input from the other characters. I think part of the issue may be that some of the posts have been pretty long and they may take away from some of the other players ability to add to the story. It's something I think you need to work on JD, try to leave the control of PCs to the players as much as possible. Be careful of taking the limelight from the PCs with agent zero or any other npcs. Also we need to find away that if you make a "support" role character that you are still included in some fashion to the missions.
I haven't played pbem for a long time but when I did we had a weekly or bi weekly posting time where you could post but if you didn't then the story would be continued by the gm or narrator in a sensible way without you. If you go radio silent without any explanation after a point in time then your character would become an npc and maybe after a period of time just written out. If you have any questions or comments don't hesitate to use an ooc post.