OOC - A World Called Kailla?

(OOC in a OOC (Is that possible?): I apologize for my lack of activity, I had a busy two weeks, but for everyone this can apply to, I will be available again. )

I know some of us are writing our own novels, or coming up with worlds when not on OW, but we usually keep them to ourselves. This can be good or bad, good since it allows us to refine them in peace, but keeps us away from finding good ideas and criticism. I have kept my world private for a while. It is one I have fallen in love with, and as some may remember my GOE Novel I was working on, I put GOE on the back-burner because I wanted to revise and rework a tonne of things.

Which leads me to Kailla, a continent where my novel The Kobold Prophecies (may consider a name change) takes place. The area of focus for now is Black Mead, Norfall, and Vulyar. But I need some help developing the surroundings. The basic non-plot-relevant info in have is that Valnirn is a dwarven city, Alterwood is an elven slaving city, and that the east area promotes slavery, while the west forbids it. Both sides have had on and off wars, but a new war is brewing.

Other than that, I will be posting a rough map, with locations, and if anyone would like to give their opinions or ideas, or is just curious, please comment below. Other than that, have a good day.

Light Green: Farm/Grassland
Dark Green: Forest
Medium Green: Swamp
Blue: H2O
Sand Brown: Desert
Brown with Blue Dots: Hot Springs
Grey: Mountains
Dark Grey: High mountain
White: Ice/Snow
Yellow: Ancient Ruins/Historical Location
Orange: City/Kingdom
Pink: Town/Village