Deadly Thirst

Who: John 'Wall Eyes' Keats, Usually stable Jack
When: Now
Where: Medi Shuttle
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The Stay-wake tablets were beginning to wear off on John, and it was
his last pack... several hours of tiring navigation were beginning to
show. The temperature was beggining to rise, or so it seemed.
'Crap' he mutterd, glancing back he noticed his close friend 'Usually
Stable' Jack gripping onto his customised Bazzokoid with a manic
tension, obviously he was feeling like a securty gard at the moment,
you could never really tell what he was thinking, seeming as soon as
you mentioned blancmonge, or even thought of it, he decided that hed
change his persoanlity, as his current one, John Knew that there was
no chance of slipping off for a smoke and a pint.
Reacting to this thought, Jack blinked, galaced at his bazookoid,
dropped it, and searched his person for something, this gave john an
idea. Preparing his fake scottish accent, john turned to his jittery
friend an asked
'Hey, Jack are ye willing to take the stick for a second?'
nervously, Jack looked up
'I can say that i have absolutely no dea how to fly this contraption'
'Great' thought John, Jack was feeling like a scientist at the
moment, 'it seems im gonna have to wait a while before i can get some
rest'
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OOC-
This is my first post, how is it, any pointers?!?