jacks entrance... again

ooc: damn yahoo stole this post the first time i posted it...
Jack stepped out of the shuttle behind everyone else, the moon shone
down on him, or what seemed like him. It appeared to jack as if he
was the only one there, he couldn't see anyone else, the light from
the moon shone as a beam directly at him. As it hit, a yellow aura
appeared around him, and he roared as if in pain. At this point,
everyone around him could be seen, they were all looking at him,
terrified of the screams he was creating. He held his arms up high,
as all the muscles on his body rippled, then expanded.
His jacket was ripped and fell to the floor, His shirt ripped, but
clung to him. His hair waved back and forth, shimmering in the
moonlight, his eyes shone pure white before dulling down to a plain
green pupil, just a green blob in the middle of a white ball.
He crouched down slightly, looking down and shaking, screaming all
the time, well... it was more of an angry shout. Someone stepped
towards him, he couldn't see who, but he could... sense them... His
hair exploded in almost a fireworks display of yellow light, everyone
looked away for a second, and when they looked back, his hair was
upright and yellow. His muscles were huge, green eyes and yellow
hair, still crouched slightly, he stopped his roar, and stood in that
position for a few seconds.
He jumped up, 3 metres into the air, then vanished in a flurry of
light. No one could see him anywhere.
At the other side of the landing party, Phil was having fun throwing
rocks around, they hit things and exploded, until he'd nearly run out
of rocks, he picked one up
"last one" he said before lobbing it into the distance, or what he
thought to be the distance until Jack appeared in front of it and
caught it, he was hovering in the air, one hand out, holding the
rock, which he shattered. He disappeared, then reappeared at
virtually the same time in front of Jay and Phil, smiling.
"whadya think?" he said.
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